Final Departure
Final DepartureSilence grips the shoulders of the younger CroneAs she stares at the empty chairAnd reminisces over the only thing leftMemories of a roller coaster lifeThere was a timeWhen we all could...
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A tale that reminds me a bit of B.O.C. "Baby Don't Fear The Reaper" the waiting ion the dance of death Blind fatigue debased intrigue/Love was traded in for pain/A path I followed with blind...
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Wow! This had some stunning twists for the reader. Excellent! many perspectives could be seen from this one piece! Well done!!Drew
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yes what Drew said..my thoughts went one waythen another and it all added up to onewell rounded picturemuch to see here poet~Secret~
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I loved this.. it brought me to thinking of the 3.. and how circles perpetuate themselves.. we might not have the awareness of it.. but we are in that circle of life and death.. thanks for a great...
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Surprising you meantion BOC Tara ....I been a HUGE fan of Blue Oyster Cult for many , many years . But I assure you , this was influenced by a personal experience from about a year ago . As always , I...
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Thank you kindly PW . Sorry , but I do have a tendency of layering somewhat lol . Glad you enjoyed it .
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Thank you kindly also Secret Desire for feeling satisfied with my whole piece .
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I must say , it is sooo damn refreshing to ACTUALLY hear replies with REASONS why a person likes what the other wrote , and I thank all the responses I gotten so far , thank you RB . Maybe one day...
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